For one-shots like this, you probably shouldn't include a huge outer plot. Like, "We're kidnapped and missing," is way more interesting than a kid falling in love. It would be a better exercise in writng just to have a self-contained plot, not something that could be a tiny footnote in a larger story about a kidnapping... well, you get what I mean. I hope :)

aww this is sweet. great ending. are you going to continue it?

very nice

I hope that's not the end cus that was... weird