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| EmotionsHaveNoBrains 2008-06-12 ch 13,  | abuseI would have to agree with you on the fact that it isn't one of your greatest stories. But the plot was very unique and I did like it. It was just something about how you wrote it. Not quite sure what. The whole idea was still great though, keep it up. ~Tyer |
| Bleeding White Lily 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuseWow, this reminds me of Godchild. My FAVORITE manga. . . well, a certain chapter in it anyway. ha ha! Though it's not the same it just reminds me of it. The first thing that popped in my head. This is relly good, kudos to you! |
| Hammy Paradise 2008-03-14 ch 13, | abuseWell... that was... uh... woah. I didn't expect Sade to become a doll. Or become obsessive. There were a few spelling mistakes, yeah, and uhh... that's pretty much it. All in all, it was, as ussual, amazing. With (a lot of) Love, H.Paradise |
| writerm 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I hope it does get pretty eerie later, cause right now, it seems pretty tame. It's good anyway, though. |
| Nethernity 2007-05-24 ch 13, | abuse2 questions: -can u make a sequel? -will Sade and Trinity be able to have a child if they're porcelain doll?XD |
| xbluxmoonx 2007-05-09 ch 13, | abuse:-O o my goodness. that was just wow. you always leave me speechless. this was one heck of a great story. i don't like happy endings as much, but endigns like this just make me go :-O like up there. lol. but that means it was an awesome ending. what happened to sade's sister and tri's dog? it would be very interesting if you made a sequel. ^_^ lol. but anyhoo, for about the hundredth time- great story! |
| Portrait of Daybreak 2007-01-19 ch 13, | abuseOh fack. :| I was suspecting that ending since last chapter, but it was still freaky. Good **, though. Good plot, good ending. But I still think it would be tons better if you made it longer, showing how Sade and Trinity's relationship develops in the House of Dolls. Two months is way too long a time to just skip when you're writing a story like this and you're in that part: when a relationship just began to unfold. |
| Portrait of Daybreak 2007-01-19 ch 10, | abuseI'm sorry, but the story is progressing way too fast for my liking. The plot is there, and so is your writing talent; it's the plot that lacks structure and support to make it more convincing. |
| Portrait of Daybreak 2007-01-19 ch 2, | abuseCrepy. Damn. But definitely keeps you reading on. :) |
| Crewger 2006-09-01 ch 13, | abusenotice how )I know I'm slow) u always end the story on a cyinical note |
| tearitrightup 2006-08-24 ch 13, | abusewhat the hell? where did sade go to? what the eff? |
| Br0k3n Mug 2006-07-28 ch 13, | abusenice lol |
| FadedWhispers 2006-07-20 ch 13, | abusewo scary love the idea of dolls and porcelain!! :):):) |
| seraphim-rush 2006-06-23 ch 13, | abuseWhat the crap. So creepy. x_X But I liked it nonetheless! I'm gonna have to beg my mom to burn or sell or do something with all these porcelain dolls in the house. xD |
| seraphim-rush 2006-06-23 ch 12, | abuseAh noes, Emily's back! x_X That was kinda cute, with the masquerading thingy. ^_^ |