I don't know why you don't like this story. I found it entertaining and although Sade turning into a doll was such a let-down, I found it a happy ending. 'Cause, you know, he and Tri can be together FOREVER! Yay! XD

really interesting.
the story was not tht good, but the plot was really nice.
daydee

Ahh, no way. I kinda expected that sort of ending, having read your other stories. And there is nothing wrong with this story, I really don't see why you dislike it.

I loved it btw, and read it in one go. nice. hehe
thanks for leaving it up though! i lurved it.

Ehh, you SHOULDN't hate this story! Waii, makes me sad. You don't like your own work sometimes.


ok, enough of me bitching. sobby.

Aww, it's sad how you say you have no "feeling" for this story anymore. It's so beautiful, but I wanna feel like the author is there with me, you know?

But that's ok. hehe. um. I love your other stories too, though. yer one of my favourites.

i wonder what the little girl is thinking. she scares me too.

damnit i love it so much! so much so much so much much much much.

WTF?? That's it? A bit rushed but ok! *shrug*
I like Trinity's personality!! She's so shy and sensetive and all; it's cute!^^
I knew that in the end the guy would somehow turn bad! They never stay good!! XD
I like the theme also!! Dolls can be so creepy sometimes! LOL

Alrighty,that was some bullshit.A great ending with a horrific twist.But shoot.After all that Sade becomes a doll version of frikkin Mr.Jakal and Hyde .Youve got to be kidding me...and also what happento his sister?

I would have to agree with you on the fact that it isn't one of your greatest stories. But the plot was very unique and I did like it. It was just something about how you wrote it. Not quite sure what.
The whole idea was still great though, keep it up.
~Tyer

Wow, this reminds me of Godchild. My FAVORITE manga. . . well, a certain chapter in it anyway. ha ha! Though it's not the same it just reminds me of it. The first thing that popped in my head. This is relly good, kudos to you!

Well... that was... uh... woah.

I didn't expect Sade to become a doll. Or become obsessive.

There were a few spelling mistakes, yeah, and uhh... that's pretty much it.

All in all, it was, as ussual, amazing.

With (a lot of) Love,
H.Paradise

I like it. I hope it does get pretty eerie later, cause right now, it seems pretty tame. It's good anyway, though.

2 questions:
-can u make a sequel?
-will Sade and Trinity be able to have a child if they're porcelain doll?XD

:-O o my goodness. that was just wow. you always leave me speechless. this was one heck of a great story. i don't like happy endings as much, but endigns like this just make me go :-O like up there. lol. but that means it was an awesome ending. what happened to sade's sister and tri's dog? it would be very interesting if you made a sequel. ^_^ lol. but anyhoo, for about the hundredth time- great story!