Oh fack. : I was suspecting that ending since last chapter, but it was still freaky. Good shit, though. Good plot, good ending.

But I still think it would be tons better if you made it longer, showing how Sade and Trinity's relationship develops in the House of Dolls. Two months is way too long a time to just skip when you're writing a story like this and you're in that part: when a relationship just began to unfold.

I'm sorry, but the story is progressing way too fast for my liking. The plot is there, and so is your writing talent; it's the plot that lacks structure and support to make it more convincing.

Crepy. Damn. But definitely keeps you reading on. :)

notice how )I know I'm slow) u always end the story on a cyinical note

what the hell? where did sade go to? what the eff?

nice lol

wo scary

love the idea of dolls and porcelain!

:):):)

What the crap. So creepy. x_X But I liked it nonetheless! I'm gonna have to beg my mom to burn or sell or do something with all these porcelain dolls in the house. xD

Ah noes, Emily's back! x_X That was kinda cute, with the masquerading thingy. _

Great, now I'm gonna be paranoid about mirrors. xD

Haha, poor, poor Sade. XD

Ah, psychotic little kid-doll-thing isn't she?

Scar-ee.

Gah, porcelain dolls creep the living dickens out of me! Unfortunately, my mom is a big fan of antiques and a few years ago she had this huge fetish with collecting antique porcelain dolls and now our house is FILLED with these creepy dolls in their shelves in the hallways and in some rooms. _ So creepy.

Great so far, but the * stars are distracting me. You don't need to place that much focus on a word, your story explaination should do that.