Reviews for Death of Eden - FictionPress.com

B.C.E 2004-08-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm trying to come up with a reason why I love this poem so much, but I can't really nail it to any one thought or another. It was well written. I loved the 'fade into nothing' line, it was just great. Be sure to keep writing.
Kat 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the way the Bible should have been written.
AntiPleasure 2004-05-22 ch 1,	abuseHey lady, we never talk anymore... argh >_< but I haven't been on AIM so that's partly my fault. Anyhoos, this one's short yet sweet, I like the 2-3 words on each line and the Adam and Eve idea. Neato. Jenna xx
Brandy Bear 2004-05-22 ch 1,	abusea diffrent form of writting than what your poems are normaly but i like it BrandyBear
esotericblood 2004-05-21 ch 1,	abusevery nice. it was a little short though. Short isn't bad, but instead of sounding disjointed and flowing, it came off more 'point form' ish. I like it, though. The ending worked well. I like your poetry.