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| Glennesque 2004-10-05 ch 1, | abuseCool poem, the pause in each line helps give the rythmn more flexability and lets the the poem flow with the ryhming. Doesn't feel forced, good poem. GmT |
| nasake-suneku 2004-06-14 ch 1, | abuseexcellent. This definately struck a chord... it's going on my favorites :)L8er, Tiffany M. |
| annihilation 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseevery word of this poem is filled with pain. Stay strong! and i think you're going to be a great poet. |
| Random Girl 2004-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm going through depression right now,(pills,therapy,etc.) and you've captured exactly how I feel. Thank you so much for showing people what it feels like to be in this state, but just remember, your not alone, cuz I'm going through it to, and if it helps (cuz this is what I also do) think of me and stay alive just for that reason...that sounded way corny but I hope you consider it. |