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| Stormer 2004-07-26 ch 1, | This is really quite deep, and I do think it requires at least a couple of reads. But I've only read it once...so maybe if I read it too many times I'll lose the meaning entirely *S* Or maybe I'll grasp it... *lol* We can all put our own interpretations on the work of others... I really liked the poem. There were some very vivid images created by those words. |
| Tk.T 2004-07-14 ch 1, | Thought provoking indeed, like most of your writing. Very good. Happy writing! Tk.T~ |
| Story-Teller's Aide 2004-06-13 ch 1, | wowedywow. some of it i really agreed with, others not so much, but the general poem was fab and most of it made a lot of sense. |
| Aneliz Rei 2004-05-23 ch 1, | After rereading it, I realize that quite a bit of it acually didn't compute so well for me. That is, I got hung up over the "literal meaning" of a few things. At the same time, I don't feel that's so important b/c the feeling and overall message are extraordinarily clear. But kudos; the first time I read it through, honestly, all I thought was "Whoa. That's beautiful". |
| destinee ariarti 2004-05-22 ch 1, | this is great..i love the words you used here, and i love the way you described everything. great work, I loved it. kacie |