really good! There are SO many love poems out there that (dont take this the wrong way) this one probably won't stick in my mind for very long. That doesn't mean its not good though, just not outstandingly orgininal

Simple, elegant, nice flow; good job.

..very nice. I can relate to this a lot..the hopelessness and all. good work.
kacie

We liked how it rhymed. We also liked the last 2 lines. Nice work! Please reveiw us back, thanks.
PS is trisket losing her touch?