good job! keep writing more and more, by the way... you are so not alone, I can relate so much with it, and Im pretty sure that a lot people feel it too... keep it up!

This is very good. This is exactly how i feel sometimes now that I think about it. I sometimes obsess over someone, but i'd never be able to express it like this. You really make the words flow and harmonize. I have read a few of your other works and I really enjoyed them. I am glad that i'm not the only one who doesn't sugar-coat things. Keep up the great work.

I felt exactly the same way before, but it passes so soon, it's like it never reli happened, and it doesn't seem to matter much anymore.the way u described the feeling was awesome^^ keep it up!

I cant relate too well to the begining, but definately to the end... I like it... but as a song it might sound odd that ome verses have longer lines than other... but i dont know the rhythm you have in mind...

ah that was really cute and nice, i liked it a lot. well done. and thanks for your reviews, much loved and appiriated.

For someone who doesn't write love, this is not bad. I liked it. Good job. It flows and is beautiful and it makes sense and it's a good song.

pwetty... hehehe i feel the same way **blush** sh don't tell any one i said that!