I liked this. I think we go through this stage with people...wanting to be in the light of the reverred one. Nice description used in this piece. Again you have a good talent, keep up the good writing.

GOOSH! SO...SO...

'Tis good. Describes truly the idol worship so many people have for others, the emotions coming across are true ones - not the transparent emotions thee usually gets from emotion-like poems.

No idea what its about But brilliant! and yes Quentin Tarantino movies kick all

That about sums up everyones first venture as no one trying to make a marketable inpression on someone.
Very well written.
~Nat

excellent poem, i really liked it.
and in response to your review, i am well aware i did not have many fact and detail. this was done because i really wasn't in the mood to type everything and anything that explained everything. so ya, i know it could have been more substantial, but maybe i shoud pick a different genre if it doesn't fit in the essay category.

I really liked the extended mwtaphor here!

nice poem, i enjoyed it, i also enjoyed some of your quotes, some of them i didn't get. oh by the way, thankyou for reviewing my BNW essay, i appreciate it, i thought no one besides my friends would review for it, you know al ot about BNW. sorry that you didn't agree on some of the things i said, it's not a very good paper, i was up till 3 am writing it, i actually forgot a lot so i don't think i will get a good grade on it, i appreciate your critcism. oh, and i don't mind if you use the phrase "tangible **" as longas you tell me what you are going to use it for.
one last thing, my G- rated poem is basically a metaphore, thanks for pointing that out, i should probably fix that on my summary.