I liked this a lot... everything is in the eyes... no?

Very good. I probably wouldn't have known what it was about without the summary, but you used the right words. I can relate to this. I like your repitition of "innocent". And the change it the end. Very good! Keep writing!
Lor

wow.. I woukdnt know what it was about w/o the summary... but after reading it... its amazing.. nice repition and I think it describes some people's feeling very well... awesome poem... I love it