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| kurskis 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseChifflanger or not, still the perfect ending! |
| chanac 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abusecliffhangers suck. hahaha... love it anyway!! |
| Evolet Blue 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseO wow. Your writing is out of this planet, I mean, this was so beautiful. And heartbreaking. The way you described him...wow. I wished I was that girl, lol. Amazing. |
| stunninglyaverage 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was AMAZING. |
| alexis grey 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! |
| cliched details 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI knew that your story was eight pages long… But when I began to read, my mind was saying.. ‘please don’t be over…. Not just yet’ ….. Aw… you left a really good cliffhanger. But Jeez! Do you really have to do that?! Can’t you just finish the story? It’s really good, you know? I’m sorry about my kinda frustrated reaction… Honestly, you should continue it…. PLEASE… ;D -clichéd_details- |
| Smiling Serenade 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing. It nearly took my breathe away. The intervals flowed perfectly, with just the right amount of a sort of hopelessness. Throughout the entire story. And the ending left such a big opening. And a wonderful feeling of satisfaction. I just loved reading it. You're a wonderful writer. (: |
| centenarian 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseshit...that was...amazing. Completely, utterly amazing. One of the best one shots I ever read. I...it was indescribable. I want to hear his voice...I wonder what it sounds like... Anyways, good job. |
| Reminising Obsession 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseDAMN!So nice.A one shot TO!WOW!I really liked it,it was so beautiful,yet quite unexpected...not really unexpected but...damnit it was good is what im trying to say!Youre a great writer!^^ |
| messy bun 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was incredibly stunning. I mean, just... wow. Beautiful. I got teary-eyed. |
| Drallimer 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD. this made me all tingly and teary-eyed. it's amazing, really like... he stepped out of many a girl's wet dream and it's like... woah man... i love you and i want to have your babies it's really moving and stuff and hopeful and the way you described him was genius. He's this enigmatic singer dude and wow... ok yeah. I'd probably react the same way if Jason Mraz was performing for his first time at a club and i saw him. anyways, this was amazing. |
| thecoconutbubble 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. How unexpected. It sent shivers down my spine when he said that he wasn't losing her again. Well done. |
| Jayjack 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing. wow. LOVED IT. haha. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's very very interesting. It's cliche, yes, but it's such a beautifully written oneshot. J'adore. (: Thanks goes to found.eventually for suggesting this completely amazing oneshot which will now be added to my c2. (: |
| K.M.Mackenzie 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseMy God this is absolutely fantastic. It is so brilliant. Just, you captured a feeling people either rarely experience, or when they do, they can't epress it. And you have such a beautiful writing style. I mean, it's so hard to review this constructively. The only changes I'd make would be grammatical and there's a bit where the protagonist turns cynnic, which really doesn't suit the entire mood of the story. Well, great. This is going favourites. I'm going to see what else you've got for me to read! Mackenzie |