   Cash Litchfield 2009-07-03 . chapter 1coolio |
 shortwinters219 2009-06-22 . chapter 1WOW 0.0 |
 Uniquely Proud 2009-05-30 . chapter 1It's a beautiful story. :D |
 ME. 2009-05-25 . chapter 1 OMG what the hell! WHO IS HE? I am gong to DIE if i dont knwo who ths is! I NEED to know! I mean it. Tel me. tell me! tell me! tell me! tell me! |
 klutz.for.life 2009-04-24 . chapter 1Oh. My. God. That was fantastic; I am shocked utterly and completely speechless. I loved the tension mixed with thoughts and the song's lyrics! Keep up the good work. :D |
 Klaudiviris 2009-03-24 . chapter 1cute, short and lovely. Loved it! |
 silver shaft 2009-03-02 . chapter 1wow that was amazing. i KNEW he knew her, especially when he looked at her...wasn't sure what was gonna happen, but i liked the ending. |
| atragichero 2009-02-21 . chapter 1 Wow, that was really good! |
| Alicia 2009-02-17 . chapter 1 wow...that was amazing! i should've seen that coming but i soo didn't! soo cute! |
| Vicky A. 2009-02-09 . chapter 1 All I can say is "aww", it almost made me cry. |
 habsrock08 2009-02-08 . chapter 1alright.
that was pretty damn amazing. LOVED it! |
 LoveAndLife 2009-01-30 . chapter 1I love this story. I just spent the last ten or so minutes looking for it because I just joined, after many years of putting it off, and I just had to put it on my favorites. Love, love it! |
| jj 2009-01-04 . chapter 1 great. absolutely great.wow. amazing |
 dyingimmortal 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Haha, I guessed it was her the song was about. xD
Nice job. I liked how you portrayed the emotions. Did you make up the song? It's really good.
All in all, I liked it. :) |
 littletealjar. 2008-12-15 . chapter 1great characterization and Elic is just a perfect name for him! |
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