hey. i like it and you're clever but i think it's a little bit over used as a topic? love your poems.

excellent! great formatting to this one, the short lines really made an impact on the way i read it/interpreted it. for the third time in a row, the ending is muchly impressing me; you seem to have a particular knack for powerful endings. ;) good job!

I liked the ending, it's been written well! Keep up the good work!
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