This one is realy toutching

wow, beautiful. beautiful. and gr i dont like the list at the end due to one of the ppl named... i have reasons, lol! anyways, songs not about them so forget that! very beautiful song, well not really. i mean its beautiful as in good but i mean not really as in its so sad and touching. u get it? i hope that made sense...

very nice.
p.s. ty for reviewing my poetry.

That was sad but also so very sweet. You really captured the mood on point. It was great for your first song and I hope to see more. Oh yea it was super sweet me mention me at the end. I'll loyally continue to read and review for you too. Thanx

this may be your first song but it sounds like a professional wrote it...i loved how you portrayed your feelings and used repititon and your choice of words to create your mood...as well as your rhyming/rhythm...and that person may be gone but he/she is in a much better place indeed!
i love to hear this song performed one day but you and i have different views of how it should go...but thanks for sharing and please continue!

This is a beautiful song, sad but it had a lot of power in it. Sounds more like Rock than a Pop or R&B song. I'd love to hear it performed. Thanks 4 mentioning me, your work is astounding. PEACE

oh that is sad...it's a cool song though...it'd be a cool one to actually hear played...then again...you and I probably would think differently on how it should be performed _

This is so beautiful i love it (TEARS) lol you got me all emotional good job!

That one was so sad. It's really good, both the content and the form.

I really like this one. It was sad though. It reminded me of people I have lost lately. Several of my friewnds have died and It feels like i'm losing the guy I like due to some fight with this other chick. Anyways. THank you so much for the reviews on my poetry. I wrote a song last night that I'm goin to put up soon. Well I'll end this before it becomes a novel. lol Great job. Can't wait for more.