|Reviews for An ExPerfect Place|
| A Face Worth Remembering 5/27/05 . chapter 1
Know the feeling, great job
| Unchained Soul 8/12/04 . chapter 1
I can relate. I like the butterfly metaphor.
| AutumnRhapsody 6/19/04 . chapter 1
I really like it, espcially the second stanza. The "we chased butterflies" part is really beautiful-meaningful it seems. But it feels to me that it should maybe have been longer-more parts like that. But the next stanza goes with it...so it would be difficult. But I think it's good this way, I really like it.
| AmethystTrish 6/2/04 . chapter 1
beautiful piece. can totally relate.
| Willow Elandria 5/29/04 . chapter 1
Simple, but poignant. I like it.
You repeat "perfect" twice in the first and last stanzas... this coud be intentional, but I think it might sound better with a little more variation in your words.
Otherwise, very good.
| Daisy Decamps 5/28/04 . chapter 1
I like the metaphor, and the imagery. Beautiful work.
| IcyDevil27 5/26/04 . chapter 1
_ Another great piece!
| karmakaze 5/25/04 . chapter 1
Aww. That's sad:-(
| KaseyLovesNoOne 5/23/04 . chapter 1
I love this! Alot! I can relate, which makes it even better.
| Henry Gray 5/23/04 . chapter 1
Simple but sad. I like it. Especially the butterfly thing...nice analogy of how the situation changed.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/23/04 . chapter 1
so relatable... *sighs* wow.