So beautiful and true! Keep up the wonderful work! love ya

Hey darling!
Not too fond of the format but it's a bunch of good points especially at the end, like the "more cute asses" funny how that's what society is all about right now *frowns*. I like how you invested the "inbetween" moments here it ties in well. Not a bad poem Heather, I hope to see some more stuff soon =)
Jenna xx

i like it... very nicely written... would oyu be willing to format a poem for me again?