oh i like this story already! I'm hocked.

I love this story, I'm torn between wanting to know the romance between Jack and Sara and solving the case! Few gramatical errors but the story is still great!

Another good story. :)

I like your story. There's lots of spelling mistakes though. Like there are words that you miss a letter or two.Poor Sarah...Update!

I liked that she tormented him with his wounds... smart.

Good Chapter! Update SOON!

and then the real trouble starts, dun dun dun.

okay... now what? don't leave us hanging for too long.

WTH? Who is dead??! Damn Isabelle I cant wait too read more!

Good Chapter!! Update SOON!!

Good chappy! Loved it, didn't get to finish it last night, thank goodness I did...I hope he tells her and doesn't do anything stupid!

o big cliffie! God i really feel for sara. She has such a bad past. Update soon please.

TTFN ~*fairy pwincess*~

Good Chapter! Update SOON!!

wo. i liked it a lot, even though it was so short. i feel like it's finally picking up into the real action.

Great Chapter/s! Update SOON!