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| Gothic princess09 2008-03-29 ch 2,   | oh i like this story already! I'm hocked. |
| BabyGenki 2006-12-27 ch 19, | I love this story, I'm torn between wanting to know the romance between Jack and Sara and solving the case! Few gramatical errors but the story is still great! |
| Desert-chan 2006-05-28 ch 19, | Another good story. :) |
| alethegoodsoul 2006-03-21 ch 19, | I like your story. There's lots of spelling mistakes though. Like there are words that you miss a letter or two.Poor Sarah...Update! |
| WarriorHeart 2006-02-19 ch 17, | I liked that she tormented him with his wounds... smart. |
| Kezza 2005-06-06 ch 16, | Good Chapter! Update SOON! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-06-06 ch 16, | and then the real trouble starts, dun dun dun. |
| WarriorHeart 2005-05-30 ch 15, | okay... now what? don't leave us hanging for too long. |
| SwytLady 2005-04-10 ch 14, | WTH? Who is dead??! Damn Isabelle I cant wait too read more! |
| Kezza 2005-04-09 ch 14, | Good Chapter!! Update SOON!! |
| Kasey Renae 2005-03-03 ch 13, | Good chappy! Loved it, didn't get to finish it last night, thank goodness I did...I hope he tells her and doesn't do anything stupid! |
| fairy pwincess 2005-03-03 ch 13, | o big cliffie! God i really feel for sara. She has such a bad past. Update soon please. TTFN ~*fairy pwincess*~ |
| Kezza 2005-03-01 ch 13, | Good Chapter! Update SOON!! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-03-01 ch 13, | wo. i liked it a lot, even though it was so short. i feel like it's finally picking up into the real action. |
| Kezza 2005-01-27 ch 12, | Great Chapter/s! Update SOON! |