Loved it. Deeply disturbing and very well written. Great song choice, too.

What happen? Did he die? Man i was soo close to tears. I love your Stories. you should be a novelist. i hope you will make another chapter.

God I loved how this all flowed together. It was centered around such a dirty and provacative image but the choice of words kept it just clean enough so I wouldn't feel naughty myself. At the expense of using the same word again I did love the dirty feeling that rubbed off on me anyhow. The lust mingled with the pain addiction. ::Shivers:: I think I love you. Anyway, grand job!
**Scars**

Okay...This was awesome I really liked it
Oh man the Angst was perfect
the Drama
Wow
Praises to u
I hope that you make a second chapter or at least a sequel
where THIS dude finally realizes that even though life sucks and keeps u down in so many ways, there still is SOMETHING out there from your grasp that is able to keep u alive all you have to do is reach
WOW I wrote that? Kool
I LOVE IT
Keep it up :)
~CookiE~

Amazing... Though as always, my review is hardly enough for what is deserved, I hope it will be appreciated. This piece is wonderful.
~Sasa

*dies of jealousy* You're too good for us mortals. Great story, great writing, great everything. Keep it up^^

that was so very well written, your writing gave it the perfect, dark and intense vibe. and the way you wrote, you can really feel where this guy is coming from. i loved it, i love your writing, that was amazing.

...crap. That was so intense and deep. Incredibly amazing. Your writing skills are so poetic and just...wow.

pretty incredible stuff...intense, deep...i have a feeling that this could be an amazing story. more please!