Wow - that is really good. I look forward to the next chapter. Especially to find out what force of magic (or other than magic?) could send so many people so far away. Very intriguing. Though I'm forced to wonder whether or not the dark mages will be able to follow... Alas, I must wait. Very good work.

I have to admit, I really like this one,i'm waiting for the fourth chapter 'cause I know it's going to be a good one! Well done on getting this one up onto the site, i hopw everyone else likes it as much as I do.