The fifth verse is my favorite. It's all really good. great writing. I wish I could hear the music to it.

That's very eloquent from Rapier. So beautiful and lyrical. Anything else much to say? Keep up the good writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

its a beautifully romantic song! he speaks so ... well i dunno how to describe it, but i really liked it

Sistah,
Why do you say it's sappy? It's beautifully written. It's very good. If you say is sappy, I'll chase you with my sledgehammer.
Rainbow Cloud - Hong Yun

I think it fits Rapier nicely! ^^
ps. there are more chapters to my stories

::cries:: so beautiful

Great! Sappy yes! But good. I liked it. In a few words it explains alot about life and all.

* years streaming down her face* when is the sequel comming out??

I liked it. But I kind of believe that it's a bit selfish of Rapier. I know that may sound REALLY weird, but it's how I feel. He needs to just learn to adapt, to go on with life. There are other ways to see than with your eyes.
But as I said before, I liked it. It was definately true to character and made a whole lot of sense.

Hey, plz update your story soon ^_^ *puppy dog eyes* I wanna know what'll happen next.. The song was well written reminded me of that Shania Twain song.. From this moment on, lol I could picture him singing this to the same rhythim... Well, hopefully Rapier'll regain his sight! Talk to you in my next review, Your Pal,
Julie