Hooray! I can see this happening. It's cool, and I like the whole imagery of rain. I know you had to do "fly quick" as part of the rhyme scheme, but it still works out quite well.
Yay!
-PTG

good, i liked it, especially how it captured a singular moment like a haiku's really meant to do. the rythym is a bit off, but still quite good for first attempt

Very well done for your first haiku but work on the rhythm...