wow. i love your ending! the first line was good too, but the ending to me, topped it off amazing job!

i dont agree with your rating... lol... great job though... very powerful & thanks for your review!

wow...such powerful writing. Wonderful, dark imagery. great poem.~Lozfairy x~

well put...i kno whatcha mean...ive said the same things...
*jules*

good. disturbing. but good.

that was cool,i liked it

i liked that...