Great job done here. The subject you have dealt with and the way you presented it was simply amazing.
I say, congrats master word smith.
~Magnus

This was a very good poem, both in terms of what it's about, how it's written, the rhyming, and the structure of it. Very good. Just...plain good.
Though you named two of the bricks "i". I don't know if this was intentional or not.
So in conclusion, good stuff. Very good stuff, La Randita Senorita.