wow, that was deep

This is one of the poems i'm not sure what to say about. It's a great poem with alot of emotion put into it!

I love your poems, their sad, but they are excellent. Keep up the excellent work!

Great poem and i like how you depict death to the "T". There is just one thing missing in your description of death, the person's struggle to open their eyes and then there is nothning, drakness envelop you.
Nice work: I'm thinking about publishing some of my work and i would like your honest opinion on some of my poems. If u can find time please R&R some of my work. Thanks
TTFN

o! i like it! the shortness of the stanzas really adds to it, i think. awesome job!

I loved the way that you set this up. It was so sad. Ya know this could really be a great song if you were to add a chorus to it. (I'm on a song kick right now.)My eyes watered when I read this. Trying to make me cry? Well actually I don't mind crying over such a fine piece of work. This was really heartbreaking. Great job. TTFN