| Reviews for so the sky rises |
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insertterriblypoeticlinehere 2/9/05 . chapter 1Bootiful. You are so going on my favorites list. Anyway, to add more substance: I love your style, your structure. it really adds to the poetry. The last line closes it up quite nicely, with the perfect feeling. The italics work very nicely throughout the poem. But I will say, that the message is kind of...murky. You get a definate feeling from it, and it's wonderful, but I cant quite see what it's saying. Maybe another read. Anyway, great job again! |
do not resuscitate 10/19/04 . chapter 1beautiful amazing lovely wow this just blew my mind. i'm in awe. |
ylem 8/25/04 . chapter 1You seem to have this thing about spherical rooms with no windows. & you make me feel much inferior in comparison. To close your eyes & lose Europe...that is just too marvelous & beautiful & wonderful & insertadjectiveshere for words. |
EveryNowAndThen 5/30/04 . chapter 1Simply amazing. I wish there was more to say but I'm lacking the words. |
superfufu 5/25/04 . chapter 1something that taps my interest needs my commendment. nice job. it made me smile. |
Incubabe 5/25/04 . chapter 1Ah... the last line. So beautiful. And nicely arranged as well, fp usually hates structured poems but nicely done! *mwah* |
floorcollision 5/24/04 . chapter 1excellent- very articulate... yet vague. this pulls on my heart! really, thanks for writing! |