That. Was. Awesome.

Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...

so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.

nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.

your style- it's so great. It's so ingenious.

Weird and beautiful and so, so you.