|Reviews for on a park bench|
| Zoe Marhassa 5/16/09 . chapter 1
That. Was. Awesome.
| insertterriblypoeticlinehere 2/9/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...
| do not resuscitate 10/20/04 . chapter 1
so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
| Another Pseudonym 8/5/04 . chapter 1
nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.
| this is britt 6/10/04 . chapter 1
your style- it's so great. It's so ingenious.
| Incubabe 5/25/04 . chapter 1
Weird and beautiful and so, so you.