Reviews for on a park bench - FictionPress.com

insertterriblypoeticlineher... 2005-02-09 ch 1,	Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...
do not resuscitate 2004-10-20 ch 1,	so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
Another Pseudonym 2004-08-05 ch 1,	nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2004-06-10 ch 1,	your style- it's so great. It's so ingenious.
Incubabe 2004-05-25 ch 1,	Weird and beautiful and so, so you.