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| Lady Patience 2006-03-07 ch 10,  | abuseI love you, too, darling girl. |
| Alone in the Desert 2004-08-20 ch 7, | abuseDisjointed and painful. This is one of your most affecting pieces to date. |
| Lady Patience 2004-07-03 ch 6, | abuseIt was worth all the waiting, agonizing though it was. You are too beautiful and wonderful for any more words, so I'll simply end with this: as always, I love you. Best and most. |
| Lady Patience 2004-06-18 ch 5, | abuseIt's beautiful darling. But I do hope our Seely is walking by 18 months--most babies walk at 12-15 months, and you KNOW I'd love for her to try dancing...and we can't have that if she's not walking. I love this one. It's perfect. Like you. |
| Lady Patience 2004-05-29 ch 4, | abuseHow could I ever mind? I have to go stop crying from how sweet this is. |
| Sarah Parker 2004-05-26 ch 3, | abusethat is too cute. I didn't feel quite like I shouldn't be reading this one... hehe... love you both! |
| Lady Patience 2004-05-26 ch 3, | abuseYou write me disturbingly accurately. And you know the answer to that last question, silly woman. |
| Lady Patience 2004-05-25 ch 2, | abuseWhat is there to say except that I love you? It's beautiful--nearly as beautiful as you. Don't deny it, either, because you ARE breathtaking. Especially when you write things like this for me. I know that you have a much harder time of it than I, but when you do write, it is infinitely better than anything I can scribble out. That is one of the many and varied reasons that I love you. Also, your breasts. *grin* Don't keep falling down, though--I don't want you black and blue. |
| mizpah0323 2004-05-25 ch 1, | abusei'm not a good writer..so i have no idea how words are put together to make a good piece.. but i can see you can write well..your honesty brings the rarity..and i find it really good.. just be honest and feel every word you write..other people may critize but just be thankful because you know the words came out naturally from your heart..(am i making any sense?) anyway, your girlfriend is lucky to have you..that's all i can say..you try to make her happy by writing..some guys won't even bother.. continue on.. |