This is a good story. I so want to find out what happens between Corvino and Leon. Update soon please.

Wow. Mathias seemed like a sweet boy. Corvino is awfully jaded and cruel. Although I suppose all that cruelty is a form of defense? I wish for you to write more soon. (trying something other than the standard, hope you update soon!) I’d like to know what happened, and would like to see what will happen. I like Mathias even though we don’t know much about him … I don’t really like Corvino from what I’ve seen of him. Well, I guess we’ll see how he turns out. I’ve never really liked characters that are compassionless and ruthless. On the other hand, I don’t like characters that are too compassionate. They do stupid things. Well, see ya next chapter! are his vocal chords healable?

Hi-- great story, very creative. I am intrigued and I especially like the historical fiction bent. Please update soon!