aw, again, really liked the end of this one ~ great little message of hope. liked how there was a focus on the second person point of view, in this one. my favorite couplet . . . hm, a bit hard to choose, but i'm going to go with, "holding envy is like slipping/in the cold dark rain" ~ that just seemed to have a fantastic texture to it, for some reason. good visual effect. nice!