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Reviews For: I'll Go From This Place
aeolyn 2004-11-20 . chapter 1
very well written poem with the background of suicide (yeah, i know thats spelt wrong) and I love the line "Don't say that I'm bad, and I am just no good"
glitterjewele 2004-06-22 . chapter 1
very good! loved the fundamental truth at the heart of this, it created this really frank, succinct tone that was easy to follow. the end - specifically, the last line - was my favorite part; loved how it referenced the title, and just the concept of it in general. great work! :)
Ushi 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
Ah. *basks* I do so love poems that feature people leaving oppressive places. It makes me feel liberated. Like when I graduated eighth grade and when I flipped off the White House. Oh, and when I chucked a basketball at a bully's head, that was good too... *basks more*
Good job, I especially like the last four lines. It's like, "Yeah? Don't waste your breath, I'm leaving anyway."
Ah, the baskfulness.
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