Intense. Are you talking about love? Maybe a smile? Hmm...makes you think...

sam u have a talent for writing about feelings please keep it up

i have a question about this one!!
whats the question...I have NO clue! lol
but this one is interesting.

Wow... intense... Very well written, but a tad bit on the ominus side...

very nice... umm, third line you spelled expensive wrong... might wanna change that... other than that, good job!
|Rikku|

This is really good! It was very enjoyable to read. You have a lot of talent!