 Shadow of Silver 2004-05-26 . chapter 1I really like this poem. Like you said, a little repetitive on the A part, but I really like it. Anyway, I really can feel the message that you're getting out through this poem. Very thought out and flowing. Although, I think you should've broken the poem into two stanzas. It doesn't really matter that much, but whatever. Nice poem.
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