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Reviews For: Running Away
Anglachel67 2004-05-30 . chapter 1
Good, good. I agree. I really want to run away right now...
Shadow of Silver 2004-05-26 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. Like you said, a little repetitive on the A part, but I really like it. Anyway, I really can feel the message that you're getting out through this poem. Very thought out and flowing. Although, I think you should've broken the poem into two stanzas. It doesn't really matter that much, but whatever. Nice poem.
[~Shadow of Silver~]
mizu no kokoro 2004-05-25 . chapter 1
so true... o well, if only life were that easy^^ great poem
arwen-evenstar89 2004-05-25 . chapter 1
I feel like this every day of the week! At least, everyday i'm not at my cottage which is two weeks out of every year! I love this poem!
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