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B.M. Brouse 2006-02-21 ch 17,	abuseoh good lord, filing _plus_ exams?! your going to kill Nate, lol.^^"I hope everything works out for him. Cant wait to read again!
Fleetfoot 2006-02-02 ch 17, anon.	abuseLove the story so far! thumbs up
DCXX 2006-02-01 ch 2,	abuseAngels names, hmm?...interesting...
DCXX 2006-02-01 ch 1,	abuseWhat a terrible day...i hate those types of days. good story though. ^_^
seilann 2006-01-30 ch 17,	abuseI'm in a critique-y kind of mood, so... I dunno. This chapter seemed a little jumbled to me. It goes from work, to the movie (which was a good scene, flowed nicely into the next), home, then work. I think you should cut that last scene, as far as this chapter goes it isn't necessary. I loved the movie scene. ^_^ But... there definitely wasn't enough interaction b/t Nat and Kito. Kito doesn't even respond to Nat being shoved on him, and while it's good to show that so little headway is being made... this chap might as well not even be here. I mean, there's only so much clueless Nat a reader can handle without the story falling through. You know? I don't mean any offense, this is just constructive criticism. Can't wait til you update! (PS: I can't remember if I asked already, but how did Nat get into his apartment? Or is that a secret plot point? o.o) ~Chippie
seilann 2005-12-12 ch 16,	abuseForgot how much I love this story in the months between your updates! ^_~ I love Nat. The fangirl in me is screaming right now, I swear. ^_^ Later! (and, hopefully, a little sooner than last time?) ~Chippie
B.M. Brouse 2005-06-27 ch 1,	abusei laughed.it probably wasnt ment to be funny, but im twisted like that. The ending was just so hilarious.write more
Secret Sorrows 2005-06-26 ch 15,	abusewow, cool and confusing all at the same time, keep it up :D sorrows
B.M. Brouse 2005-06-25 ch 14,	abuseawesome.Will you read my angel stories onces they get posted? cause yours is really, really,really, effing good. I love how you portray Nat and his wing problem.Aquriel is really neat.
MercuryMoon 2005-06-13 ch 2,	abuseI like this style of writing because it really lets you get into the character's head and understand his feelings. Hee. I can learn from you since I'm trying to improve my own first-person. ^^ Nathaniel. What a fitting name for the character. XD
MercuryMoon 2005-05-25 ch 1,	abuseVery nice voice the protagonist has. Sometimes it's hard to tell if he's being sarcastic or not, but I suppose that's the beauty of reading. I like watching storms, but I usually do it inside because it scares me. Nice job of showing how your character's different than "normal" humans. Really nice opening chapter overall. ^^ and i'm sorry I didn't review sooner. my net was killing all the pop-up windows.. -.-
meonlymejustme 2005-05-18 ch 4,	abuseWow, this is really good- you have a great way of writing and your descriptions made me feel as if i was actually there- nice one!
meonlymejustme 2005-05-18 ch 3,	abusePoor guy, he seems a bit messed up. One good thing about starting a story with so many chapters- I dont have to wait ages to find out what happens next- woohoo!
meonlymejustme 2005-05-18 ch 2,	abuseOkay, I've just realised that I've read this chapter too. Sounds really interesting- let's see if I've read the next one.
meonlymejustme 2005-05-18 ch 1,	abuseHey! I was just randomly going through stuff and I clicked on your web page thingy. I was looking at you drawings (which are great) and your illustrations (which are greater) n they were kinda familiar so I clicked back on your story n realised I’d read the first chapter ages ago but never gave you a review. Hmm- don’t know why coz it's fantastic, your descriptions are brill! So yer, I’ve decided to read the whole thing now- might take me a while but I’ll do it eventually :) Oh yeah- and gud luck with the med school thing!

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