|Reviews for Rings Around the Lovers|
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 6/3/04 . chapter 1
o, i love it.
| invalid id 5/30/04 . chapter 1
Unique idea (Reminds me of the song Gravedigger a lot.) I loved the poem, as always my romantic side loves it...especially now a days. Just nothing really to improve upon, you always write well, gramatically and effectively and everything.
| catseyeview 5/28/04 . chapter 1
I love how you posed this as a child's game, love...and how we "all fall down." another great piece.
| Danny 5/26/04 . chapter 1
this is really good... and sad... but good... and meaningful... i like it
| Saraiyu 5/26/04 . chapter 1
great spin-off...it was extremely well written
| Tommy2007 5/26/04 . chapter 1
A wonderful spin-off based on an original piece; even the top games producers can't do that with films! lol. Good idea portrayed most beautifully. Truly opens your heart to the reader, too.
| WakeRobin 5/25/04 . chapter 1
Amazing spin off. I really like it!
| Lisa Monroe 5/25/04 . chapter 1
wow..i wish i could write that well
good job...that's really amazing
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/25/04 . chapter 1
ah cool !i remember that song from my childhood too! cute idea. adn was that really u that review with the erin... smthg at earth... smthg email addy? i dunno, annon reviers sometimes lie bout who they are and pretend to be others, lol! if so, cool! if not well then u got an impersonator out there, lol! cute poem btw
| Autumn tears 5/25/04 . chapter 1
Interesting interpretation of the old rhyme. Yours is just as morbid (in a wonderfully beautiful and poetic way) as the original. I love the comparison between the ashes, ashes to a phoenix. Thats always stuck in my head when I heard that part of the jingle, so it was awesome to see someone else use it in a wonderful piece of poetry.
| shaddowcat 5/25/04 . chapter 1
wow deep, and yet I feel the feelings it's really good.