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| Reviews for Broken |
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   Stuffblah 2/19/10 . chapter 1Wow. This is amazing. It's short but just..fabulous. Simple but really makes you think... :) It's given me an idea for a new story actually. Thanks! Your a real inspiration. |
| Mormon Princess 1 8/27/04 . chapter 1 Nice.. Ilike it a lot! |
| Needa S 8/18/04 . chapter 1 Sad... Awesome write! |
| Edraith 7/23/04 . chapter 1 Beautiful, the idea of taking one's heart asd if it was an object makes this astonishing and fits well with the idea of the haikus to shiw things from unexpected angles. I like the melancholy, sad tone. |
| sifer 7/3/04 . chapter 1 this touches me, i feel sad now. |
| twilightwriter07 5/27/04 . chapter 1 Nicely done...the images here are conveyed really well. |
| Sang Yu Nung 5/25/04 . chapter 1 I like it- good and angsty.. for only 17 syllables... you give a good tone and people get the image nice work! |
