|Reviews for Broken|
| Stuffblah 2/19/10 . chapter 1
Wow. This is amazing.
It's short but just..fabulous. Simple but really makes you think... :)
It's given me an idea for a new story actually. Thanks! Your a real inspiration.
| Mormon Princess 1 8/27/04 . chapter 1
Nice.. Ilike it a lot!
| Needa S 8/18/04 . chapter 1
Sad... Awesome write!
| Edraith 7/23/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful, the idea of taking one's heart asd if it was an object makes this astonishing and fits well with the idea of the haikus to shiw things from unexpected angles. I like the melancholy, sad tone.
| sifer 7/3/04 . chapter 1
this touches me, i feel sad now.
| twilightwriter07 5/27/04 . chapter 1
Nicely done...the images here are conveyed really well.
| Sang Yu Nung 5/25/04 . chapter 1
I like it- good and angsty.. for only 17 syllables... you give a good tone and people get the image nice work!