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| Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseNice.. Ilike it a lot! |
| Needa S 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abuseSad... Awesome write! |
| Edraith 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, the idea of taking one's heart asd if it was an object makes this astonishing and fits well with the idea of the haikus to shiw things from unexpected angles. I like the melancholy, sad tone. |
| sifer 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abusethis touches me, i feel sad now. |
| twilightwriter07 2004-05-27 ch 1, | abuseNicely done...the images here are conveyed really well. |
| Sang Yu Nung 2004-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it- good and angsty.. for only 17 syllables... you give a good tone and people get the image ^^ nice work! |