| Reviews for Broken |
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Stuffblah 2/19/10 . chapter 1Wow. This is amazing. It's short but just..fabulous. Simple but really makes you think... :) It's given me an idea for a new story actually. Thanks! Your a real inspiration. |
Mormon Princess 1 8/27/04 . chapter 1Nice.. Ilike it a lot! |
Needa S 8/18/04 . chapter 1Sad... Awesome write! |
Edraith 7/23/04 . chapter 1Beautiful, the idea of taking one's heart asd if it was an object makes this astonishing and fits well with the idea of the haikus to shiw things from unexpected angles. I like the melancholy, sad tone. |
sifer 7/3/04 . chapter 1this touches me, i feel sad now. |
twilightwriter07 5/27/04 . chapter 1Nicely done...the images here are conveyed really well. |
Sang Yu Nung 5/25/04 . chapter 1I like it- good and angsty.. for only 17 syllables... you give a good tone and people get the image nice work! |