i'm wondering, you say the 'heir' and the 'child' and such... but is it even a WOMAN...? lol, i'm confused... but it would be wuite funny if it turned out to be a MAN and a WOMAN was the one to give HIM a kiss, ew! lol
pretty okay, so far... mwahahahaha!
becca

hello?? are we like the same person except we just don't know it yet?
I'M reading hitchiker's guide to the galaxy AND i just watched both shreks...
..have you ever read a book that's called, i think, Briar Rose? it's by robin mckinley, i'm pretty sure.. it's based on the sleeping beauty story too.. and the witch's name is jane there too!
what's with the naked greek men?
is the beauty and brains poem original? it's very good
and your intro was great too.. i love topless men and pina coladas
can't wait for the next chapter, twin!

This is so cute! It has tremendous potential and I'm looking forward to reading more of it. Of course, there were a few spelling mistakes, but nothing a good spellchecker couldn't help. Anyways, I thought this was great, keep writing! :o)

i think this one's actually interesting! granted, it's got an ordinary 1st chap, and i think i know what to expect, but i'm willing to see the 2nd part =D so please DO post the 2nd part up =)

TE HE this is so funny, I really like it, my mom is asking why I am laughing so hard... Any Ways, I know that reviews make people feel special so special shal you feel, hopefully, :-D any who this is writen very well and I just think it is a halarious idea and all the little side notes, i cant stop lauging, keep up the good work and let me know when the next chapters gonna come :-D cause I HATE.. *cough cough* I mean LOVE clifhangers

Well, I'd have to say--being an avid fan of humor and fantasy (but most of all the child I am loves fairy tales), I was quite delighted to see this in the "Just In" ... thing. XD
First of all, I love the fact that you have taken one of the most widely known fairy tales and given it a little touch of something different, your own personal...touch. >.>;
There is a lot of potential for this story to grow (obviously)
Personally, I think it would be good if you would either continue on, building and changing some things about the original fairy tale to match your personal style, or do the aforementioned but also throw in little parts from other well known fairy tales. *Shrugs* Just an idea, in case you wanted one.
Lastly, (not to be rude!) you ought to use a spellchecker before you post your story--there are a few spelling mistakes--nothing big, just a comma or letter out of place.
Good job, keep going!