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| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 9,  | abuseooh, you must continue with this! Poor celeste, must be an awful situation to get stuck in. Great work with this story, it's very well written. i like the little bits of French in it, that sort of put you in the right place and everything, reminding you of where you are :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 8, | abusevery very good. (just thought I'd say though, your bold and underline have not some out, they are still there as: French Translations ) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 7, | abusewow...this is really good. I am enjoying it lots, love the girls and the plot and everything. I have a c2 for the Regency which I'm adding this too, hope you don't mind. |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abuseand they meet! Yay. Did I mention how wonderfully you portray the difference between their two lives?@ not just the description of the places, but their whole attitudes and ideas. great job :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 3, | abusewow. You created a lovely atmosphere in this, I was literally holding my breath what she waited for them to accept her or not. Great job, and I do like the characters, they are very realistic. Also you manage to create a wonderful sense of the differences between the two worlds :) |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 2, | abuseI love, love it that you've changed the POV here to the other girl. Very lovely, and again, some very nice writing and characters. |
| Prieda Solo 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written. Good characters too, and I love the POV writing, well done! |
| Ali Priestley 2004-08-16 ch 8, | abuseAha! I loved it! It was very good. I love your stories! ...alyssa... |
| Tangerine Dream 2004-08-13 ch 2, | abuseThis is absolutly wonderful. I would love nothing but to read more, but I have to wake early tomorrow and must retire immediatly...I can't wait to finish the other chapters and I hope you update soon after! ~Tangerine Dream~ |
| Ali Priestley 2004-08-01 ch 7, | abuseWow this was really good. I hope you do add more soon. Melodie and Celeste sound really cool and I really do enjoy your historical fiction. ::alyssa:: |
| Systole 2004-06-19 ch 7, | abusenice cliffy... |
| KirjavaLyra 2004-05-30 ch 5, | abuseI really liked this chapter! You should write more quickly, because this is excellent. Maybe you should also add more of the French culture and some French words or something? But this story is very good! |
| KirjavaLyra 2004-05-29 ch 4, | abuseAnother wonderful chapter! Hurry and write more! |
| KirjavaLyra 2004-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThis is really good, but in some parts, the grammer was wrong or awkward. The one part that stood out to me was 'Then, suddenly, it did, though.' It doesn't fit with the way Celeste narraters everything else. Besides that, the story is very interesting, and realistic. |
| Jacquleine Schaeffer 2004-05-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is awesome so far! I love stories about the French Revolution, so of course I had to read this one. The first two chapters are great. I absoutely love the contrast of the rich and poor, but at the same time the subtle similarities--fabulous. I can't wait to see what happens!! -JS |