Again, the imagery in this poem, just blows me away. I can only wish to obtain this gift. The begining lines are what really captured me.
Oh, and I was just wondering what you thought about a person by the name of 'Dai Arashi'. That's his account name. His poetry has really inspired me. I think you would really enjoy it.

Superb. Rich and deep. You've addicted me! Reading your work I can realise a lot about myself as well! This (like all your work) is brilliant and very well thought out and written!
Fallen V

"Swallow up my dreams
Eat whole my shallow indulgence
Free my imagination to
Inspirations waking hour
Or nail tight a pine lid to my
Casket so bitter hatred
Colours blackest hues to
My palette"
Simply beautiful. The power of this poem is impossible to deny and, strangely enough, the italics help set the atmosphere. Keep up the great work!
The One and Only
Simply

Very deep and meaningful keep up the fantastic work you amazing poet

I love the way you wrote this poem
I sit waiting for change
Ideas exploding as pollen
From a blossoming
Flower caught in a light breeze
YET TRAPPED IN A STRANGERS
ARMS AS I AM YET TO
KNOW MYSELF
Those last couple of lines on the
first verse were my favorite the poem was excellent I just wish I could write like you
Anyway, carry on writing :
SL91

I like it a lot and i can relate.. the first stanza is awesome