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| Lady Ariel 2004-06-04 ch 1, | You're rhymes sound forced. :/ Maybe you should try free-verse? I normally don't write rhymes, because a lot of times they only work with funny poems or short poems. |
| Happy-Platipus 2004-06-03 ch 1, | I love it when you write complicated things! This is really awesome! I also love it when you write uplifting, hopeful things! Again, your rhymes work beautifully, and it is really amazing how you keep the structure and the idea all at once. I so totally agree with you! |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2004-06-01 ch 1, | "And this love I'm receiving/Helps me keep believing/And brings me that much closer/To knowing that I really am"... God rocks. Or is HE the rock? Tzur Yisrael? Hmm. m~* Sunflower, anyone? |