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Reviews For: Whisper From Above

Lady Ariel
2004-06-04
ch 1,
You're rhymes sound forced. :/ Maybe you should try free-verse? I normally don't write rhymes, because a lot of times they only work with funny poems or short poems.
Happy-Platipus
2004-06-03
ch 1,
I love it when you write complicated things!
This is really awesome!
I also love it when you write uplifting, hopeful things!
Again, your rhymes work beautifully, and it is really amazing how you keep the structure and the idea all at once.
I so totally agree with you!
Sunflower Philosophy
2004-06-01
ch 1,
"And this love I'm receiving/Helps me keep believing/And brings me that much closer/To knowing that I really am"...
God rocks.
Or is HE the rock? Tzur Yisrael?
Hmm.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
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