Reviews for Forsaken Identity

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. 2007-12-09 ch 26, anon.	abuseYou should have labeled your story as angst.
yayawhynot89 2007-09-25 ch 26,	abusem i think the fic could have been developed better it seemed rushed and didn't really get all of the points across but i've read worse
coours of the rainbow 2007-09-21 ch 26, anon.	abusejust wanted to say that i really loved the way it turned out. i agree very much on the issues regarding Lena and Timon, that they should be separated and that their love would be a bittersweet one. the Story was Great! and i dont think any other ending would have done it justice. too many happy endings give us too much comfort sometimes.
All's End 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abuse:D
Words.Love.Music 2007-07-09 ch 26,	abuseThat's a wonderfull Story you wrote!! The End was so emotional i had to cry. Very touching and tragic Story but still wonderful!!
cherrypiesizzle 2007-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI love historical stories; you did this beautifully.
AuburnGraces 2007-05-14 ch 25,	abuseI only decided to review this story after reading the entire thing (it was quite addictive!) I really loved your use of the love triangle, the two male characters felt so real and you actually felt for the decision she had to make- neither choice would bring her complete happiness. It made a great change from the stories showing a typical good guy/bad guy, and instead showed a security vs. love (however unsuitable). I also really appreciated your ending, it always annoys me when an author ignores the logic of the circumstances for the sake of a happy ending, your ending was very fitting and I'm glad you made that choice.
atreyu love 2007-03-04 ch 12,	abusethe story's interesting
atreyu love 2007-03-04 ch 7,	abuseits intersting
Nerdette 2007-02-17 ch 26,	abuseI still don't know what to make of this story's ending...
youpin 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abuseEXCELLENT STORY.
WIM 2006-12-16 ch 26, anon.	abuseThis was a good story. And although you have already finished it along time ago, I think it would be nice to add an epilogue. You had written in one of Timon's lines "in this life or the next". I think if you had the epilogue be modern day, and have them meet again - but this time end up together, would be a good sub-ending. But actually, I like the ending you have as well. It shows real life instead of a fantastic fairy-tale. And Im happy that you didn't have them end up together in this life of theirs. It wasn't fitting.
Talayeh 2006-11-20 ch 1,	abuseHowdy! I just finished your story and have just a bit to comment about it. First off, I love the setting and your usage of history. I adore European history and thus this was quite fascinating and stimulating. I'm surprised I've never come across one of your stories before, but am glad I finally did. Wildfire is coming along great and just as interesting. Now to the criticism... there's nothing major that bugged me, except the romance between Timon and Lena. Now, I understand Timon's feelings for her, they're reasonable and expected. Lustful/Evil intentions... at least that is what I saw it as at first. Gradually they evolved into meaningful and deep emotions. Now onto Lena. It seemed as if her personality fluctuated from strong-willed to submissive. Only in small doses though. But how on earth could she have fallen in love with Timon? (I understand Philo) He's cruel and... what else would you use to describe him? Even towards the end, he didn't seem to have changed at all. Still the same manipulative and ill-tempered Prince. In the last chapter it seemed as if he did a 180. It doesn't make sense in my mind how Lena could've developed real and deep feelings for him. Affection due to all her time spent with him, I can see that. But love? Maybe I interpreted this completely wrong... there's that possibilty. Maybe I read the story too fast? (Not such a bad thing though? haha) It'd help me to know your thoughts on this. ^_^ Anyway, your style of writing is wonderful and flows smoothly (with some writers, even if they use perfect grammar, it seems jerky in a way). I think I'm over-analyzing this... x_x Congratulations on an amazing, completed work! Talayeh
Vixen of Vienna 2006-11-17 ch 10,	abuseExcellent story. You have some spelling errors, but I am sure you will address them when you go back and edit. I like the plot so far. The detail is also very well done. Oh, and I love the setting. No kidding. I am such a classics buff.
come on lena! love philo! 2006-11-09 ch 26, anon.	abusethis story i must say is the best. i've seen stories where there are good period-language, but poor writing. then there are stories which have fantastic writing but out-of-context dialogue. YOUR STORY WAS FANTASTIC! when i saw it in my head, it was like a movie panning in my mind. the scenes all mean something! the character have a purpose! everyone of them! THERE ARE ALSO BRILLIANT ONE-LINERS; FANTASTIC ONE-LINERS THAT MADE ME HOWL! god, i loved how you changed scenes with ease, it was like a movie! i feel so sorry for philo; i was rooting for him (even though he got the girl, he still not as happy as he thought he would be)! criticisms: there are some parts where you use modern language like 'gotten' and the such, and you have mispelled some characters like 'Alcaeus/Aclaeus' or 'Philo/Phillo.' Other than that CONGRATULATIONS. BEST STORY EVER IF I EVER SAW ONE. GOD I STILL CAN'T GET OVER IT. IT STILL HASN'T HIT ME YET. CONGRATULATIONS ONCE AGAIN

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