I love it! The rhyme and rhythm are awesome. . . It's so true too- great job!

~Lauren

A poem of impossibles, if only it were a little longer and complete.

beautiful piece! love it. thanks for the review.
~finding sanity

I've started a simple rating system in my reviews. 9 out of 10. Great job! Your poems are always wonderful and I hope they always will be. This poem sounds alot like Everlasts' "What It's Like"..I would give a few lines of it, but I don't remember the song well. Once again, great poem!
[~Shadow of Silver~]

So short, yet oh so pretty. I LOVE IT! ::puts on favorites::
~SRA

Heartbreaking. LUVED IT!!

wow. that's...whoa...i can't even explain it. awesome work!

I love the whole style of this. Well done.

I would love to show you, but they are only in my heart, and mind and soul! Just as I know your's are in yours! Good Write! Goddess Bless!

Excellent Metre and wonderful wording. Moving and yet uncommercial and not indulgent or sentimental.
Excellent!
KEEP WRITING!
F.C