This is beautiful, and looking at the review youve recieved, they simply havnt done you justice. "Nice word choice" Yes, your word choice is beautiful, immaculate and flawless. But, the way it flows and pulls at you. The punctuation, minimal... pulling you through it. I like it. I find that you have the tendancy to write much of your work in this fashion. Its very good.

Gorgeous word choice!

I like it a lot... nice word choice