AH these type of stories KILL me this was really good. I think the ending was a bit to short but I liked it.
Can't wait to read more.
Love Middi

Ghost story... almost a cliche one after you finish and see the end, but until then it's actually interesting.

Cool story. It could use some grammar and spelling check though. Other then that it was an awesome story, please continue. If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness:The battle

Nice story. There are a little bit of grammer errors in it though.