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| Sang Yu Nung 2004-05-26 ch 1,   | Extremely sad, but sweet... The part about "sixteen months since I knew I'd die for you" was a nice twist to a poem topic that is shown here a lot, I really liked it! ^^ |
| do not resuscitate 2004-05-26 ch 1, | remarkable poem, i really liked it. it was sad, especially the las line "i just wish i could have said goodbye." there was some really good rhyming in there too. |