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Alyssa Rosado
2006-10-11
ch 20, anon.
abuseOH MY GOD!THAT WAS SO GOD!Dude wow that made me feel good, made me cry, and gave a new perpection of love. I love this story. I found my favorite story and favorite author. This is really good, but you had a few typeos n the one sense went too fast, but besides that IT WAS SO GOOD!
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2006-10-09
ch 20, anon.
abuseOh my goodness. Wow. This story was quite amazing. It was so very good and I enjoyed immensly. At first, when it was shown to me, I thought "Oh it's so long!" and I admit that I thought I might not enjoy it at first, that it might be to lengthly. But that turns out to be just what made it so grand. I started reading and I just couldn't stop until I reached the end of the story. And that ending was a great one. "Good job!" is all I have to say. Perhaps, you should start looking for a publisher of some sort? lol And once again, it was a great read.
xo-pauli-ox
2006-10-09
ch 20,
abuseoh wow.. i love it! i cried, laughed n everything.. its so guud! and im glad u chose to write this fic diff to other fics and not typical and cliched =D awesome work! =D
Brittany Falling Fast
2006-09-25
ch 20,
abuseHey I wanted to let you know this was a great story. I was really into all the characters, and I couldnt stop reading( which my boyfriend wasnt happy with, he wanted attention). So good job, hope to read a lot more of your work!

- Brittanyfalingfast
Angel_Kiss
2006-06-11
ch 20, anon.
abuseomg finally ive been waiting for u to finally finish this up! it was SUPERB and i loved every minute of it.

i dont like to admit it, but this story actually made me cry! :P
LunaSerena
2006-06-06
ch 20,
abuseOMYGOSH! I loved it soo much! I cried, well teared bcuz my boyfriend wouldn't hush! It was very beautiful and so sweet! I was very surprised and pleased with the story. I can't keep believe you kept your fans waiting for such a long time. It was worth the though, I have to admit. What a wonderful story! Just my kind!! ;) I loved it! It was great! Absolutly Fabulous luv!! xo
SwTsUgAr
2006-06-04
ch 20, anon.
abuseomg that story was amazing. U DID MAKE ME HAPPY!! YAYY U. i can't believe...yes, im scured to write any details cuz ppl mite read them reviews first so they gonna be spoiled at the ending and its such a good ending i dun wanna ruin it
Nerdette
2006-05-30
ch 20,
abuseThis is freakin' beautiful!
SimplySweetnSour
2006-05-23
ch 20,
abusethat is the ** right there! this story literaly brings me to tears. this is like the awsomest piece of writing ever! you should consider reading some stories by YISA on fictionpress. she is rocken. love this story so much.

SimplySweetnSour
SimplySweetnSour
2006-05-22
ch 18,
abusewow, this chapter is so great. i literaly got me to tears. brillient
Carbon Slash
2006-05-22
ch 20,
abuseOmg! I love it! As long as they're together in the end! ^_^
co0kieCrazii
2006-02-21
ch 9,
abuseah are you going to finish this? T_T only ONE chapter to go!! please dont give this up!
Gio
2005-10-20
ch 19, anon.
abuseO MY GOSH!! i love this story, its great; it makes me cry, laugh, and get angry at times too. IT'S WONDERFUL!! i cant believe that you let seiko die like that with yuki in japan and not letting her say good bye. it better have a good ending! she has to remember him and we have to know what happened, you know what did aki have to say to yuki. gosh i was like on the edge of my seat waiting to see what had happened with seiko. write soon chica, i cant wait forever!! um..i like kina she's cute; reminds me of um sailor moon, serena and rini (however you spell her name) only they get along better. you are a great writer, despite what you may think! finish finish finish!! o n i so thought that like haru was like proposing to yuki, i would have been a little upset. o very notebook like too did i mention that? gosh my thoughts are all crazy..um so yea are yuki and haru just remaining friends?? they better! i dunno if hes any good for her, i mean she still feels incomplete..she needs someone to make her feel complete. o n o my gosh the snowflake necklace, aww what a reminder of seiko..how does yuki not notice that almost everything around her reminds her of him. gosh i luv it, i LUV it, I LUV IT!! more more more! cant wait for the last chapter! hmm..i hope i said everything..wellz anywayz fabulous story girl! you should keep writing, not just this story i mean but like you know u have talent. ok g2g bcuz i dont wanna get in trouble! ttyl..well ok probly like now ok bye! lolz! xo
I LOVE GRAPES
2005-10-15
ch 18,
abuseI already reviewed for the last chapter so I had to review this one... Are you going to finish this? I really like it and want to know what happens. Please finish! ~K
Spikes_kitty_kat_tiff
2005-10-06
ch 19, anon.
abuseOMG juju we need to talk omg why does he die why why its not fair but omg it was a great story so full of emotions
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