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| A-wolf-called-Skya 2006-02-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow, i loved the expression in thios piece. i love freewrites ^^ anyways, this is on my fave stories! ttyl, -Rachel. |
| Hermoics 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI've talked to my mirror. She looks back at me and when I'm sad she cries for me. I like this poem. It's a true work of art. Aneways Love Hermoics aka the Wolf NS |
| Masked Fairy 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWell I'm not the best at criticing poems, but I must say this is very good. Very...sad, but I like sad. If a poem can give off a feeling you have done something good. |
| ShadoWings 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseNot bad at all, honestly, it contains some strong hidden emotion in there that I'm not sure many could grasp. But great work with this, you're not at all a bad writer. |
| Writer-of-Night 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good poem! It makes you think and those types of poems are awesome. Anyway, if I get the chance, I'll swing around to read some of your other work too. Thanks for the review! |
| Ballerina with a Gun 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow - I like this poem! Very real. Also, I love your bio; it made me laugh! Good job, and I'll read your other stories when I have more time! |
| JadeTheShaterbox 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abusehey , that was prety good , i like it .to dramatic for my pic in poems but still prety good . |
| Chase William 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing is the title needs to be captitalized, but otherwise I REALLY liked the poem! -CW |
| BloodStainedLove 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHi! You reviewed my first chapter story, so I'm readings your stuff. This is really good! I've heard only a few poems, but I like it. Woo! Go you. It's just so... misterious(sorry, I really can't spell). I am now going to read your other stuff. Thanks for writting and reviewing! BSL ^-^ |
| Veelivar 2004-11-22 ch 1, | abuseWell Done! ^-^ Its great, and it makes you think, really. And don't ever think that you aren't a good or great writer, because I think you just proved that that is not true. |
| serpentofdadeep 2004-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a great poem. Most people have questions like that. Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing mine. |
| Tyath 2004-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWoah-! This poem is great! |
| morning-flower 2004-09-13 ch 1, | abusehi vagrance. i know i said a long long time ago i'd review your stuff and i honestly meant it! short story: my computer crashed MAJORLY and i lost like, EVERYTHING. took me a while to go, DUH, check my fiction press thingy for your profile. i'm not too bright sometimes. ANYWAY, reason it took so long is because im a fanfic writer too at w.fanfic.net (hp) so haven't been here for a while. oh yeah, this is a review!! wicked poem man! given me some incentive to write some of my own. if only the damn librarian would give them back... oh yes, i'm rambling on again! BRILLIANT! BEAUTIFUL! STUNNING! and i am NOT being sarcastic. don't even dare acuse me of that! no, i am just over enthusiastic. i'm trying to work myself up to reading your other story. violence?! i'm squemish!! i suppose i should read like, one chapter. better not be too extremely violent! |
| sinner saint 2004-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good poem; it portrays something that I think everybody has thought about at least once in a very interesting way. I like it a lot. ~sinner saint PS R&R mine? |
| Skara Brae 2004-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting take on some thing I'm sure everyone, (or at least, I have) has found themselves asking at one time or another. The flow is natural enough that you don't even realise your not the one thinking it. Great. |