The ending of this chapter doesn't make it seem like the little encounter is going to be fun for Kali or the girl. Great job!

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This chapter is so depressing and dramatic, but well written.

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Of course, Jason liked her in the past, but is he really over it? Ah, the suspense!

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That was a sad chapter. Like I said Kali has some problems.

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Ah, so they're both taken.

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This "understanding" development can be good or bad. Let's hope for good.

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Good chapter.

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Of course, something had to happen between Jason and her. ;)

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Kali has some serious problems. Jason and Dante have their hands full. What caused her to have such low self-esteem?

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I don't know what to think. This Dante should just hop on a plane and tell his girlfriend that she needs to sort out her low self-esteem. Talk about low self-esteem. Nice character development.

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It is one twisted story.

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That was one heavy chapter as you said. The plot thickens.

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Something is definitely up with this girl. Good chapter. The flashback was sweet.

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Her fiance sounds like a really sweet guy. I wonder what's up with her though. It sounds like she has some problems.

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The flashback was sweet.

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