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| breakme 2004-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseI love the last verse and the last two lines. The rhythm is really good and it flows nicely. Great job! |
| MaHaLLz 2004-05-29 ch 1, | abusehey, that's how life goes. but i still loved it. i remember feeling the same way once. holla atcha girl-SweetPinay04 |
| t0mh4nk5 2004-05-27 ch 1, | abuseomg. i love it! =D I havent seen anything from u in a while...i love it all but im afraid the "All I see I cannot filter" line is my fav...just ebcause it reminds me of HOLDEN from Catcher in the Rye! We were talking about how his brain doesnt filter anything...damn. great job once again! =D *fav stories list* |
| the lorax is coming 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseyeah, you just expressed a bunch of emotions i WISH i could express |
| AllThatMatters 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWe liked the part about mending. Menders just aren't accepted in this world :( Great work! Please reveiw us back. Thanks. |