Once again, an amazing poem. I felt especially touched because this is the way I feel towards my mother. My poem Saturn's Tears was based on a similar mother. Your work is beautiful, please continue.

very good poem. i enjoyed it. reminds me of my mommy. . .

read it a while back but never reviewed...its really good.
Btw...in that poem that wasnt what I was triyng to say...I was just getting all of my random thoughts throughout today out of my head. I've thought about a lot. That wasn't what I was I was trying to say. I was just thinking of love in general and such. Just worded my poem kinda off...

That was beautiful. I especially LOVED the ending. But when you come online later tonight, I'd like to find out why this poem was written. :-\

Aww . . . this is such a sad poem . . . What exactly did they do that was so unforgiveable?

not bad . i liked it

Bravo.