Reviews for The Castle in the Story

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NinjAlt 2007-06-02 ch 66,	abuseHope to see more from the sequel. Interesting story. Would have liked to see Maple being more useful though.
the flaming river 2006-12-28 ch 66,	abusei LOVE this story! I feel like screaming! I was up until three am reading it and then i woke up at 7:30 to finish it. So cool!
For What Its Worth 2006-09-15 ch 66,	abuseA sequel? Oh, I can hardly wait! This ending was indeed too abrupt.
FreedomStar 2006-09-13 ch 66,	abusewow, it's over!! :( Will be waiting for the sequel :)
Saiyuri 2006-09-05 ch 51, anon.	abuseWow! I'm amazed you've managed to get so far on only 58 reviews. You're inspiring! I like how complex the story is- but I feel sorry for Tanner- but all stories of war have their tragedies, yes? ^.^ I'm your new fan.
BlueEmerald4 2006-08-28 ch 63,	abuseI have to honestly say that this is the best story that I've read in a long time. And I'm dying for the rest, so please finish it. We need to know what happens. I spent two full days in front of the computer reading this. I just couldn't stop. It was a good way to spend the last two days of summer break. So please finish this story so that all of your readers can finish it as well. BlueEmerald4
micky 2006-08-27 ch 63, anon.	abuseAw.. My heart is breaking. Doriel and Maple have sucha confusing relationship and I just want to keep reading. It's a shame that the pages do not go on forever but then I wouldn't have a life because I'd be living off something fictional but it's so good! Can't wait for update!
Kara 2006-08-24 ch 63, anon.	abuseOk, im confused, the Oracle told Doriel that his path lay in the world of men and with the corellions. not with the elves...so y is he Galatdros?
For What Its Worth 2006-08-16 ch 60,	abuseWhere is Doriel? Did he finally take up his responsibilities and not tell Maple? That is so cruel. And no matter what, don't breal Maple, Tanner and Doriel up. They're like a family.
Pam Smith 2006-08-06 ch 59, anon.	abuseYeah, so I totally won that bet saying I could read everything that you have written so far before the end of the day...And all I can say is 'wow'...I suppose I could also say that I'll shoot you if you don't write more, and quickly. School's going to be starting soon and I might not have any time to read your story after school begins, so I'm begging you, finish quick...please?
Pam Smith 2006-08-04 ch 51, anon.	abuseCurses. I started reading this story last night, and I'm finished with chapter 51 now. Curse you and your evil good plot keeping me up at four in the morning when I have to be at work at eight thirty.Gr.Well, anywho, I really like your story. Some of the writing seems a bit choppy and hard to follow, but alltogether very nice. Also a lot of times you tend to use the same descriptive words a lot. You may want to clarify what exactly the 'song' thingy is. While it's a cool idea, I just wish that it were explained a bit better. There are a lot of typos, but you said yourself that a lot of these chapters were unedited.Well, I have to go now. I bet my sis twelve bucks I could finish the story tonight.
For What Its Worth 2006-08-01 ch 58,	abuseNo! Hushweather's dead?! Bring him back! The boys are all right, iwawsn't much attached to them. lol. I'm horrible. Is Cullen and his party going to catch up to Maple's first, or Gerard's?
IeatLettuceForBreakfast 2006-07-27 ch 56,	abuseAH!lol, you better update soon, this is probably my favorite story, mostly because you didn't just throw it together and publish it on fictionpress. I love the depth to your characters
Abby M 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseHi I'm Abby M. I just wanted to say that I totally love your story Castle in the Story. It was totally awesome. Everything came together like it was real. I've read all 53 chapter so far and I'm hoping I'll be reading more. I saw that the posted date was about two years ago and that got me a little worried. But either way your story is amazing. The characters, the setting, and every event seemed to be real and it was all I could think about for the whole week I was reading. Congradulations on such a wonderful story and good luck with in the future. Abby M.
For What Its Worth 2006-07-21 ch 53,	abuseDon't try to shorten it! The pace is just fine the way it is. Awesome chapter. update soon...I can't abide cliffhangers. lol.

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