Good job. Keep writing!

yet another great one...you amaze me chic

Wow...that's really all that comes to mind. I wish I had your inspiration, really. That was good...Difference and change is good. You should write more like that. You put the reader into the seat of the person that is taking action. I felt her pain, her fear of the small room, I saw her image. It was great! You have soo much potential.
~Sandra~